Paul Samael

Shen by Heather Douglass

June 12, 2013



So far in my reviews of free fiction, I’ve tended to focus more on the rather nebulous category of “literary fiction” (whatever that may be) rather than more well-defined genres like science fiction.  Heather Douglass, however, is an author with a foot in both camps.  I am indebted to Bernard Fancher for pointing me in her direction, as she had published several shorter pieces in the “literary” category of Smashwords, one of which he had reviewed.  These are well worth a read – I particularly enjoyed “Dehydration” and “Red Hotel on the Strand.”  And it’s hard not to warm to an author whose biography on Smashwords reads:  “Oh, here's the embarrassing thing. Not anticipating this biography, I have failed to fill my life with any exciting material.  I'm hoping there's still time for improvement.”

But I digress, because this review is supposed to be about “Shen,” an engagingly offbeat science fiction novel which the author describes (slightly tongue-in-cheek) as “space opera for the unprepared” and “a mythic space fantasy where the number one mission of the crew is to discover whether they have one”.  Though accurate, these descriptions may perhaps give the impression that we’re in “Hitchiker’s Guide to the Galaxy” territory – when in fact the author’s intentions are a bit more serious than that (unless I am the hapless victim of a 97,500 word joke – which is not entirely beyond the bounds of possibility).

The novel starts out on earth, with the novel’s anti-hero, David, cheating on his wife, then popping out for a curry only to find himself on board a spaceship.  The only other inhabitant of the ship is the mono-browed alien Brahm, who seems as bewildered as David by all these goings-on.  They are soon joined by others, including Cha Cha, a spirited and engaging Chinese girl.  David, meanwhile, is thoroughly unpleasant to everyone, but somehow the author manages to make a rather compelling spectacle of his restless, antisocial behaviour.  For me, these two protagonists were a particular strength of the novel (and helped to differentiate it from your average sci-fi novel, where character development is often somewhat neglected).

The bizarreness of their predicament is offset in this first part of the novel by the way the action regularly switches back to normal life on Earth and the reactions of David and Cha Cha’s family and friends to their disappearances (and occasional reappearances).  This contrast worked very well because it gave the novel a foundation in our own world, whilst gradually putting the pieces in place for the action to shift to another planet entirely in Part 2.  It may also mean that readers who aren’t particularly interested in science fiction would still get something out of this book, because many sections of the first part aren’t really science fiction at all – they are more concerned with developing the characters of David and Cha Cha and depicting how people react when those close to them suddenly vanish.

In Part 2, the ship and its rather motley “crew” head off to another planet and we are introduced not just to a range of new characters but to an entirely new world (although one that has enough similarities to our own not to seem too alien).  As such, Part 2 is more of a conventional sci-fi/fantasy story than Part 1.  However, it is still quite ambitious in its attempt to depict the interplay between different racial/cultural/religious groups;  it reminded me in many respects of Frank Herbert’s “Dune” series and the late Iain Banks’ “Culture” novels.

As for what the novel is about, I think the author is mainly interested in using science fiction as a vehicle to ask big existential questions like “Why are we here?  What’s the point of it all?” - hence her reference to the crew’s number one mission being to discover whether they have one.  She is also very interested in the power of ideas to shape the way that people behave.

The main criticism I have of the book is that by the time the focus finally shifted away from Earth, I found that I rather missed the regular “return trips” back to Earth that are a key feature of Part 1 – and I didn’t find Part 2 quite as compelling.  But perhaps my feelings about Part 2 are more a reflection of how much I enjoyed Part 1 – so I don’t want to overemphasise this point.  There is certainly no shortage of plot development or interesting ideas in Part 2 – all of which helped to keep my interest to the end (and yes, if there is a sequel, I will read it – although I am hoping the author will take us back to Earth at some point).

At the time of this review, “Shen” was available free of charge from Smashwords.  Heather Douglass’s other work (also all free and well worth a read) can be accessed here.  Finally, she has a nice line in short, pithy blog entries – adjectives which can’t, alas, be ascribed to most of the blog postings here on “Publishing Waste.”

 

Trade by Lochlan Bloom

May 26, 2013



“Trade” by Lochlan Bloom is narrated from a point in the not too distant future when an internet platform (a sort of cross between Facebook and Ebay) has radically changed the way that people approach sex.  Sometimes you have a feeling from the first page that something is going to be worth reading - and for me, “Trade” delivered on that initial promise.  The premise was sufficiently intriguing and enough happened in terms of plot to justify the label “novelette,”...


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The Third Person

May 20, 2013




It’s the 1980s.  Lizzie, our narrator, is 14.  Her father has left home and her mother doesn’t seem to be coping too well in his absence.  Lizzie spends an unhealthy amount of time holed up in her bedroom, practising her calligraphy, tending her Victorian bottle collection and making devious and elaborate plans.  These generally involve eloping with Mr Phillips, the shopkeeper (if only he would stop being so obtuse and realise that he and Lizzie are destined to be togethe...


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The joy of procrastination

May 13, 2013

As I have no contact details for Martha Deighton, who’s recently penned a quite lengthy review of my novel on Smashwords, I’m going to say “thanks” here.   Actually, “thanks” feels a bit inadequate really because she has clearly put a lot of time and careful thought into her review – and although I never expected my novel to have broad appeal, it’s great to know that it worked for her.  She has also picked up on all sorts of things which I hoped readers would ...


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Scribd stats mystery

May 3, 2013

I have tended to focus my attention on Smashwords and Feedbooks as publishing platforms - since other sites I have tried, like BookieJar and especially Wattpad (click here for my curmudgeonly musings on the latter), don't seem to have generated very many downloads.  But I have persisted with Scribd, even though my "read" stats there were certainly nothing to write home about. Until now that is - because for some reason entirely beyond my understanding, "The Pick Up" has, in the space of a few...

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Faction or fiction

April 17, 2013



While on holiday last week, I thought I would put the accuracy of my Goodreads recommendations to the test, so I chose some of the books they had suggested to me based on my own ratings of books I’d enjoyed (or not – but mostly the former).  So far, the recommendations have been somewhat wide of the mark.  Take “Ascent” by Jed Mercurio.  It’s about a Russian, Yefgenii Yeremin, who (after an appalling childhood in Stalingrad) manages to become a fighter ace during the Korean War.  He...

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Amazon + Goodreads = end of world?

April 3, 2013

So, Goodreads is being acquired by Amazon - what does this mean for indie authors?  Well, if I put my ear to the floor, I do believe that I can hear the sound of the four horsemen of the publishing apocalypse galloping towards me at top speed, mercilessly crushing indie authors to a pulp beneath their pounding hooves.  Or maybe that’s just the kids leaping around again upstairs.

I feel a bit the same way about the Goodreads/Amazon tie-up.  At first, I was inclined to think that it was very l...

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The Pick Up

March 24, 2013

 

Just published “The Pick Up”, a long-ish short story (11,000 words) which is in some respects a companion piece to “The Hardest Word” (although it deals with very different subject matter).

If I’m lucky enough to get much of a response, I will be interested to see how readers react to the incident in the playground which is at the centre of the story.  If people don’t believe it could happen, that may mean that I haven’t described it convincingly enough – because it is based o...

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Unpredictable

March 13, 2013



“Unpredictable” is a collection of 3 short stories by Bryan R Dennis available as an ebook free of charge on feedbooks.com. 

Oh no, I hear you sigh, not another collection of short stories (e.g. see here and here for previous reviews of short story collections).  But let me try to make the case for short stories in general – and then why you should try these ones in particular.  First, short stories are a good way of trying out a writer to see if you might like their longer work (in...


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Youwriteon - what's it good for?

February 27, 2013

Some time ago, I promised to do a review of Youwriteon.com, which is a peer review site aimed at budding authors.  I was intending to do this after I’d taken a look at a similar site called Authonomy.com, so I could compare the two.  But having got a moderate amount of feedback on the first few chapters of my novel via Youwriteon, I decided not to bother with Authonomy (mainly because peer review sites can be very time-consuming).  Anyway, back to Youwriteon - first, the good points:


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Paul Samael Welcome to my blog, "Publishing Waste" which will either (a) chronicle my heroic efforts to self-publish my own fiction; or (b) demonstrate beyond a scintilla of doubt the utter futility of (a). And along the way, I will also be doing some reviews of other people's books.
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